Friday, June 21, 2013

When God Proved Himself Through the Storm - a Testimony by Author DeEtte Beckstead



I have been asked why I write Christian stories. The answer is easy:  because I am a Christian, and my life experiences come through in my writing. I can't help it, it just comes out!




I cannot remember a time in my life when I didn't love the Lord. I was told that even at two years old, I was excited about Jesus. My parents were Christians, as was my maternal grandmother. I was raised loving Him.



I had some experiences as a young teenager that let me know I was precious to the Lord, and kept my faith strong. But it was when I was in college that I realized I had to decide if I was really going to commit my life to God or not. I attended a home Bible study group with college kids at my pastor's house when I prayed to make that commitment. I felt a huge weight lifted from my shoulders and a fresh wave of peace come into my heart. I didn't love Jesus any more than I had before, but I had the peace that I truly was forgiven and had the confidence that I had been made new in Him.



The next year, 1973, my good friend and I were going to drive about 150 miles from Salt Lake City to a small town in eastern Utah to witness to a friend. This was before the freeway went through the canyon. Now it takes about two and a half hours to get there.



Lesley called our friend Mickey the night before and told her we would be there about 9:30 the next morning. We planned on leaving my house at 7, with a driving time of two and a half hours. I was very familiar with the road, and I thought that was a bit of a push, but Lesley had hung up the phone before I could tell her.



That night it snowed, nothing unusual for late April. There was only about an inch or two in Salt Lake, and my dad asked me if we were sure we wanted to go that day. Both Lesley and I looked at the sky and decided we would still go, it would be okay. We hopped in the car and started driving at little behind schedule at 7:30 am. It was fewer than five miles till we were in a blizzard in the canyon. Both of us were nervous, and we started praying. The road was slick and there was little traffic on what was normally a busy road. At the summit we had to make a hard right turn down a steep hill into a small mountain town. As I started to turn, the car started to slide sideways down the hill. All I could say was, “Father, our lives are in Your hands!”  Immediately the car went into perfect control. I did not have to steer, it was being steered straight down the hill, and at a perfect, safe speed. As the sky cleared, we continued a few more miles to another town and stopped to relax and grab some breakfast. We stayed there 30 minutes.



As we were getting back in my car, some people who had just arrived commented that my car looked like we had gone through what they had just gone through. They had come from the direction we were heading, but it wasn't snowing where we were, so we decided the storm had probably passed and we continued on.



A few minutes later, a few snowflakes danced on the windshield, then more, and in moments, we were again in a white out and the road had a couple inches of ice covering it. If you have ever driven in the mountains, you know how dangerous the roads can be in storms. There are often drop-offs or the road is cut from the mountainside and there can be a solid rock wall. There was nowhere to turn around, so we decided to continue on in the white out. I told Lesley to watch for oncoming traffic while I watched for the snowplow posts on the right side of the road. We were near a reservoir, and were climbing the hill on the far side of it. The drop off to the water was at least three or four hundred feet. We crept on, praying all the time. I did notice a blue car a few yards behind us that kept up with us all the way. We were only travelling 5 to 10 miles per hour because any faster and we would slide. We drove on and on, praying so hard we were immersed in His presence, unaware of our surroundings. There was no fear, just peace.



Finally the storm just stopped; it was like driving out of a room of snow into the blue sky and sunshine. I noted the little gas station right where it cleared. It was the only one on that stretch of road. We breathed a prayer of Thanksgiving and drove on. It was beautiful on that side of the storm! Another thing I noticed was that the blue car behind us was no longer there. It had not passed us, and had been right behind us to the end of the storm. It was just gone!



We continued our drive to Roosevelt in awed quiet, wondering at what had just happened to us, and knowing how God had protected us in that terrible storm. We arrived at Mickey's house at 10:30 am. Now, Lesley had told her we were leaving at 7 and would arrive at 9:30, two and a half hours driving time. We left at 7:30, half an hour late, and spent another half hour in the restaurant. That made the total driving time two and a half hours! We found out later that the Highway Patrol had closed the road just after we had passed through (or did we go through unseen?).



The next day on our way home, we measuring the distance from the little gas station to where we knew the storm had started the day before.  There were 23 miles of storm in that canyon. That was just the second part of the storm! If we were going 10 miles an hour, that 23 miles would have taken us two and a half hours to go just that far. And if we had been going 20  through that 23 miles, that still would have been one and a quarter hours! That entire trip today from Salt Lake to Roosevelt, with the freeways, still takes two and a half hours! You explain to me what happened!




I knew beyond a doubt that God had our lives in His hands, and He protected us. Did He transport us? I don't know. Did He stop time for us? I don't know that, either. What I do know is that the experience of the blizzard solidified my faith that He would always be there for me, through every kind of storm. Since then, there have been numerous “storms” in my life, and every time He has been there for me. I have felt His arms around me when my heart was broken. I have heard His voice call my Name. I have heard Him tell me I am His princess, no matter what anyone else or even I think about myself.



So why do I write Christian stories? Because that's what I am. I am a Christian.


More About the Author:
Author and blogger, DeEtte Beckstead started writing in 2007 when her son challenged her to get involved in the National Novel Writing Month, known by the acronym, NaNoWriMo. The manuscript sat untouched with several others until January of 2012 when a good friend encouraged her to seek publication. The Christmas Visitors is her first published short story, and her current novel, Victory is also her first.



DeEtte spent much of her childhood playing the piano, clarinet, and guitar, reading, and making up stories. She was active in Girl Scouts, which gave her a  variety of experiences. While in college, she was on the University of Utah Synchronized Swim team, and taught winter camping and survival skills for Girl Scouts. She has spent many years working with people with disabilities.



Originally from the state of Utah, currently DeEtte lives in New England where she writes full time and works on the editing team of Master Koda Select Publishing. Her other interests include swimming, crocheting, reading, traveling, history, and her grandchildren. In addition, this devoted mother of six and grandmother of twelve has been a concerned participant in dog rescue services for many years.











AuthorsdB pagehttp://www.authorsdb.com/authors-directory/66-deette-beckstead 







Victory on Amazon

Victory is the story of a little girl, and the town where she lives. The town of Victory has a history of patriotism, faith, and friendliness. The little girl, Brown Eyes, orphaned when her missionary parents were killed in a fire, lives with her only known relative who does not want the girl. When The Guest comes to town, the people open their hearts and town to him, without knowing who he is or what his motive is. Shortly after his arrival, The Stranger appears, much to the discomfort of The Guest. Slowly, the town loses its freedoms as one of the men takes over little by little. When there is a face to face showdown on the mountain, the life of the child and the future of the town are at stake. Who will have the Victory?




The Christmas Visitors on Amazon

It's Christmas Eve, and Sam and Ellen are driving home for Christmas. A blizzard and a paranormal sighting cause an accident on a lonely country road. The couple and their small children seek refuge at a nearby farmhouse. What they experience there with the elderly couple that live there will change their lives forever.

Wednesday, May 1, 2013

How to Unclog a Stuck Blogger


I've been stuck. Not with writing my novel or editing or any of that other good stuff writers get blocked about. Nope, I just haven't blogged in a while. Not here anyway. And I feel a little like Solomon when he pointed out that there's nothing new under the sun. So here I am, digging up from some deep place inside me, ways to jumpstart my thoughts in blogger fashion.
  1. First, I’m freewriting. When the juices aren’t even simmering, that’s a good place to start. I can freewrite about the trouble of free writing. Freewrite about blogging. Freewrite about the plants I’ve killed off over winter because I forgot to water them. The point is to write about any little old thing that rolls into my brain, uncensored. Stir the pot.
  2. Phase two, I journal. How is this different than freewriting? It’s uncensored, too, of course. But journaling is usually a bit more focused. It’s jotting down things that are important to my day or my moment. This might even be better than freewriting, because it kindles a little fire under things I'm already concerned or excited about. I begin to see parallels between my writing life and my real life, analogies burst out, life lessons that I'll carry into your stories, my blogs, my articles -- sometimes intentionally, other times subconsiously.
  3. I read a few favorite blogs. Apparently a lot of people never dry up. There are a gazillion new posts every day. So I tap into them. Other people’s thoughts can usually stir response or passion or ideas. I don’t lollygag over them too long, but long enough to fill the tank.
  4. I could take a walk. To be honest, while this seems to work well for a lot of writers, it doesn’t do a great deal for me. I tend to get distra – squirrel! – See what I mean? I think about everything but writing when I take a walk.
  5. Now, taking a shower, there's an idea! Showers work better for me than walks. Maybe it’s all that warm flow of water heating up my brain. Maybe it’s the dull white walls surrounding me, devoid of any possibility of distraction. Some of my best ideas come in the shower. Unfortunately, I can’t keep pen and paper in there.
  6. If all else fails, I'll dip into a file of previous notes. You have one of those, right? Someplace where you once jotted ideas or stored clippings, or maybe you even began work on a post and abandoned it? I'll see if there’s anything that’s marinated long enough in there.


If none of these ideas works to get me unstuck, I have only to be patient. If I keep at doing these, eventually I'll have an epiphany.

Write on!
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Thursday, January 31, 2013

6 Tips for Tweeting Your Novel - Finding a Hook in 140 Characters or Less



Tweets about your novel are advertisements, plain and simple. We writers cringe to think of "pushing" our novels, but facts are facts. In this day and age, we can't crawl away in a corner and hide from the marketing monster. 

 
The real trick to advertising our books on Twitter or any other blurb-posting-social-networking site, is finding the right 140 characters (or whatever brevity the site demands) that won't sound like we're shouting, "Here comes a sales pitch!" but will cause our followers to say, "Whoa!" and click a link.

I'm sure I've written plenty of those "gag me" pitches myself. So what kind of tweet might actually stir interest without being off-putting or just too easy to mouse past?

There are a few, but first, you have to realize that no matter how genius the tweet, it isn't going to appeal to everyone, because not all your followers will be drawn particularly to your kind of novel. Really, I read zero sci-fi. No matter how perfectly crafted, startling, or mind-bending your tweet, I'm probably not going to click through and investigate your novel even if I thought the tweet snappy or clever.

The same goes for some people who see my tweets. If inspirational or historical novels don't interest them, it doesn't matter how fantastic my tweets are. Those folks aren't my intended audience.
But, for those who are, several things matter:

First, does the tweet offer them something enticing and different? There are a zillion tweets about how "she is stalked by a killer". Well, that might be a great book, but I'm a bit immune to that mention in a tweet because I see it so often. Tell me something different. What makes her stalking unique? Or how can you give me that same information without using the same worn-phrase. Think smart adjectives or sharp verbs. (I believe tweeting is one place where adjectives can be helpful.) Here are two such tweets I like from Nike Chillemi:

SANCTUARY POINT mystery series. Tiny village, close knit families, heinous killers. #inspy #1940s tiny.cc/7jcbrw



Cryptic message cut out of newspaper headlines. Is the killer hunting reporter Kiera Devane? PERILOUS SHADOWS is.gd/W2Hm2N


Second, include the book title whenever possible like Nike did above. Studies show most readers need repeated exposure to a book before they become interested. I think this is especially true when they can't see the cover. In that case, they need to see the title again, and again, and again. The repetition will hopefully create some buzz. I would also suggest putting the title in ALL-CAPS. Here are two tweets by Barbara E. Brink that each employ a clever play on words giving meaning to the title and definition to the genre:

Where murder & wine make the perfect vintage…CRUSHED #kindle ow.ly/h9hl6 #napa #mystery #romance



Jael plans to destroy the Bishop once & for all, but first she has to milk the goat… SHUNNED http://ow.ly/eKaeR #vampires #Amish #humor #YA

Third, make the best use of quotes from reviews and endorsements. Don't just say it's a 5-star review. Give a powerful sample, some WOW words from the reviewer. If a reviewer called it a delicious read or a ripping good adventure, use it! Reviews are another place where adjectives can work in your favor. Also, if you're going to quote a review, use the hashtags  #review or #reviewer, or else put the quote in actual quotation marks so you don't sound like you're making up your own brag. 

Lastly, unless you truly don't have room, remember to include the title of the book, as I said in point two above. Here's an example of great use of a review or possibly it was used as a back cover endorsement. In it, I also like that author Janalyn Voight gave the name of the reviewer. That lends credibility:

★★★★★"Suspense, danger, visions, love, secrets..."I LOVE THIS BOOK!" Kim Justice: DawnSinger amzn.to/10n2TxP #YA #Adventure


Fourth, be creative. Come on! We're writers! Our blurb or tweet is the same thing as our elevator pitch, and needs to pack the same punch. Put effort into it. Don't be dull. Offer excitement, romance, adventure, intrigue, wit, fear, something that stirs our emotional curiosity. Key words like those in the tweet above that provide summary for the feel of the story are very important. Here's one of mine in which I also played off the word "renovation" because the heroine is a landscape architect:


Lapsing judgment, betrayal, doubt. Sean needs renovation for a HEART NOT TAKEN. ow.ly/h7NkG #Christian #contemporary #romance



And this one puts the plot in a nutshell:

Jesilyn longs for her twin's fiancé, and he can't tell them apart. THE BLACK ROSE  http://ow.ly/h7Q6i #Historical #Women's#ChristFic

Fifth, Show, don't tell. This advice isn't just for the actual story-telling. Use clips in your tweet --you know -- novel hook lines. Include a hashtag like #novellines if you can fit it. The key is to allow your fellow tweeters to enjoy a snapshot, a brief moment of voyeurism into your book. In my opinion, this is one of the single, best ways to capture interest for your novel.

NOTE: When you use a hook line, it's very important that you step outside yourself as the author for a minute. Divorce yourself from your masterpiece. Really look at the line you've selected from the viewpoint of someone who knows zilch about your story and ask yourself the tough questions: Just because it's a great line to me, because I know the plot and am emotionally attached to the protagonist, would an outsider find it to be a great line? Does it have the power to entice on its own?

140 characters minus the ones needed for the title, link, or a hashtag isn't much room to entice a reader with a hook line, so don't use trite lines. Find something simply smashing. Here are a couple I've liked from Tammy Doherty, one from Marcy Dyer's new YA release, and several of my own I had fun digging up:

“He wants me all to himself, Abby. That’s what he said. No more working here at the saloon." CELTIC KNOT http://ow.ly/gO7MS #ChristFic #Kindle



“You killed her David. You killed your wife and child. Surely they’ll hang you for this.” CLADDAUGH #eBook #Christfichttp://ow.ly/feMuN


"Just so we're clear," he whispered, "I don't have a girlfriend." Down & Out http://ow.ly/gLgw6 #Christfic #john316authors



"You're a catty girl, Margie, all willingness and wiles," he said softly. THE GREEN VEIL ow.ly/gOoDN #novellines #Inspy #HistFic



"Kelly has his demons, same as me. He's just possessed by them differently." THE RED FURY ow.ly/gVAw4 #novellines #kindle #histfic



She moved closer. "I mean, me marrying Mitch, well...it doesn't have to change anything." THE GREEN VEIL ow.ly/gB5XG #Inspy #Hisfic



"I like a little fight in a gal, but that ain't what I'm payin' for tonight." THE BLACK ROSE http://ow.ly/gi19A #ChristFic #HistFic

Sixth is a brief word on hashtag diversity. Think outside the box when it comes to hashtags. Instead of just using #novel, #HistFic, #romance etc. think of the how your novel addresses those types of things. Does it deal with a former alcoholic anti-hero? Tweet #alcoholism. In my novel The Black Rose, the protagonist is a twin, so I hash-tagged #twins. My books are set in 1800s Wisconsin, so sometimes I use the #WiHistory hashtag. Is your novel about a little old lady who knits away while she solves mysteries? Maybe you can use a combination #knitting #reading hashtag. Do a few searches on interesting hashtags and see what kind of tweets they turn up. Don't make up a hashtag no one else uses, unless you're trying to create a brand for one you hope will go viral.
  
Finally, you know those novel tweets you glaze over when you're scolling down Twitter, the ones that make you yawn? Just pause at them and ask yourself why.  And then, well... just don't tweet that way! :)